Don't mean to be a jerk, but as your job is coveted by so many people, including myself, you might want to have an editor look at your write up before publishing. Example: "...the basics are all here. A fixed 43mm Showa inverted fork along with Sachs hydraulic shock absorber cushioning the load out back. Equivalent-sized radial-mount front brakes, a friendly hydraulically-actuated clutch and a sharp looking Digitek digital display." You have two sentences that aren't sentences. At least start the section with a colon or a hyphen and finish your thought: "...the basics are all here: a fixed 43mm Showa inverted fork with a Sachs hydraulic shock absorber cushioning the load out back, equivalent-sized radial-mount front brakes, a friendly hydraulically-actuated clutch and a sharp looking Digitek digital display." Won't go into all the punctuation stuff, but hope you'll take this as a friendly heads up from someone who writes and edits for a living and loves to ride and read about motorcycles - thanks!
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